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Well done!
Good article. I thoroughly agree. Although "your mom" will probably prefer the simplicity of Ubuntu over the tweakability of Kubuntu.... happy

There is one thing you can do, though, to improve readability: put the conclusion (the "home message" in the last paragraph) on top.

Perhaps in bold type, to emphasize it's importance. Then the sequel functions as an elaboration of that statement, and the reader is kept on track.

By the way, that's the way the ancient Romans used to structure their speeches, and it still works fine! happy

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Posted by: pjotr123   Posted on: 06/20/07 You are currently: a Guest | Members login | Terms of Use
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Well done!  pjotr123 | 06/20/07
Good suggestion...  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
Linux  bkhoury | 06/20/07
Good Introduction  wolf_z | 06/20/07
Good start  Yagotta B. Kidding | 06/20/07
Agreed...  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
Updates made  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
Good Work Chris  D. T. Schmitz | 06/20/07
I'm a grandma...  bekat@... | 06/20/07
Glad it helped...  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
Emailing Christopher  tellray@... | 06/20/07
You'll find Chris Dawson's email link....  David Grober ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
Not so true (greet article and embracing linux)  NumloQ | 06/20/07
Is this too much too soon?  jswift | 06/20/07
Next article??  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
@ Next article  pjotr123 | 06/20/07
I agree...  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/20/07
How-to  pjotr123 | 06/22/07
Three things you might find helpful and/or  btljooz | 06/20/07
Also remember:  ppyo | 06/21/07
Drop the mother, grandmother and old secretary stereotype  vlf@... | 06/21/07
Fair enough...  mrdatahs ZDNet Moderator | 06/21/07
Its All Good  rMatey | 06/22/07
This mom's ready to Kubuntu  sonrisza | 06/26/07

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