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Some grammar
You have quite the run-on sentence (Basically if your organization ... ? skills mismatch disaster.)

You also need to remove negative words like fail (Windows skills don?t carry forward to Linux, mainframe skills cause Solaris to fail.), and replace them with "pleasant sounding euphamisms" like "have difficulty" or "be problematic" or whatever.

The content is good. You do a good job of setting a tone without putting people on the defensive.
Posted by: Roger Ramjet   Posted on: 04/11/08 You are currently: a Guest | Members login | Terms of Use

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Some grammar  Roger Ramjet | 04/11/08
and on and on and on I go - fixing errors  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/11/08
Also, while on this para  Ross44 | 04/11/08
Thanks!  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/11/08
RE: Questioning IT  John L. Ries | 04/11/08
Or not.  Anton Philidor | 04/11/08
You need to ask another question  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/11/08
Risky business  Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
Of course - but a bit off topic  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/11/08
Sure you are...  Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
Ok - guess I'm not being clear  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/11/08
Oversite and Data  Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
Optimistic blindness  Anton Philidor | 04/13/08
The Board of Enron had been informed...  Anton Philidor | 04/11/08
Does it work as a symphony?  Ross44 | 04/11/08
Logic eh? remember the audience  murph_z ZDNet Moderator | 04/12/08

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