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You have quite the run-on sentence (Basically if your organization ... ? skills mismatch disaster.)
You also need to remove negative words like fail (Windows skills don?t carry forward to Linux, mainframe skills cause Solaris to fail.), and replace them with "pleasant sounding euphamisms" like "have difficulty" or "be problematic" or whatever.
The content is good. You do a good job of setting a tone without putting people on the defensive. - Posted by: Roger Ramjet Posted on: 04/11/08 You are currently: a Guest | Members login | Terms of Use
Some grammar
Roger Ramjet | 04/11/08
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and on and on and on I go - fixing errors
murph_z  | 04/11/08
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Also, while on this para
Ross44 | 04/11/08
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Thanks!
murph_z | 04/11/08
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RE: Questioning IT
John L. Ries | 04/11/08
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Or not.
Anton Philidor | 04/11/08
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You need to ask another question
murph_z | 04/11/08
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Risky business
Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
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Of course - but a bit off topic
murph_z | 04/11/08
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Sure you are...
Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
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Ok - guess I'm not being clear
murph_z | 04/11/08
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Oversite and Data
Erik Engbrecht | 04/11/08
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Optimistic blindness
Anton Philidor | 04/13/08
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The Board of Enron had been informed...
Anton Philidor | 04/11/08
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Does it work as a symphony?
Ross44 | 04/11/08
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Logic eh? remember the audience
murph_z | 04/12/08
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